Like this! (entry for the PLDX contest, by Cla)

15 years ago

9/10, minor problems are that you should have redone the smoothing where you could see some ticks and also you should have viewemodel on one of the frags. Other than that, really nice!

yin

15 years ago

tbh i watched every movie how good or bad it was at tf2 so far ….

but this piece was really brilliant i was really suprised after these steamforu mguy post his little scene if there can be something better for tf2 and there we go

i loved it and also the music was great even it was not my style

but its not even about every single ones style just about the moviemakers one guys please keep this in ur mind

10/10

klu

-[MG]-
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15 years ago

Really liked that, the best of the movie comp entries so far IMO.

9.5/10

Hiper

27
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15 years ago

Just wow. The best movie of the contest without a doubt.

Blackk

Const
SS

15 years ago

not perfect, but the best one so far

alfa

15 years ago

Very nice movie 10/10

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15 years ago

A bit messy at times, like alot of speeding up/slow-mo effects all over the place. I mean, it was nice and all, nice syncing, but towards the end of it it all just seemed over the top.

Dreadful music. But overall good effort, 8/10

Brutallus

15 years ago

Ladies and gentlemen, we have a winner!

I’ll drink to that.

Gaile

fap

15 years ago

GG CLA
u r much improved in editing and sync. nice movie skill . try to join some movies producers

Last edited by Gaile, 15 years ago

Imperium

15 years ago

A bit messy at times, like alot of speeding up/slow-mo effects all over the place. I mean, it was nice and all, nice syncing, but towards the end of it it all just seemed over the top.

Dreadful music. But overall good effort, 8/10

Arnold

DAKKA

15 years ago

Some half-decent typography for a fragmovie so kudos to you. It’s the small things like that that really make the difference.

good synching, some cheesy effects some really lame effects but all in all very solid effort. You even had some very interesting camera angles.

In conclusion I have to say this might be the best tf2 movie i’ve seen yet.

Just some tips in general to any movie maker.

TYPOGRAPHY:
goddamn read up on basic typography so you would stop using godawful free fonts that you think look good but brings the overal quality of your movie down to kindergarten level. (in this case you had half decent but there is still a lot of room for improvement)

CAMERA ANGLES:
you can’t make a fragmovie more boring by just playing frag after frag in first person view, it’s not a sin if you don’t show the frag from first person (you had interesting angles so i think you did a decent job)

EFFECTS:
less is more, and consistency. Stop using cookie-cutter effects the program you are using has installed.

MUSIC:
I don’t care as long as it fits your movie, there is no such thing as fragmovie music. As much as some dweebs would like to say there is, it all depends on the overal feeling and theme you have going.

I’ll just leave it at that.

Last edited by Arnold, 15 years ago

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