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Could need some criticism with this one (:

Created 18th March 2012 @ 12:47

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seeker

Hello there. I was bored yesterday and started trying some new things out like skyboxes and new colour corrections and would like to have some criticism on the clip. I would appreciate if you could give me a comment either here or underneath the video. Thanks :)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K0qOmHRxpFM

Morphine

(Cat Enthusiast)
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I’m no movie edit, but here’s my opinion:

– Not a fan of the explosion effects, make it’s messy
– A bit too blue and dark. You got a really bright skybox too. (Like in 0:29, the sky takes away the focus from the soldier you are shooting)
– Add a crosshair!

seeker

Thank you, I will definetely try out to correct the colours next time and will disable the particles from PLDX. I think the last point is rather personal opinion, some like it without some do like it with a crosshair. Still, thanks for the comment :)

Morphine

(Cat Enthusiast)
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I like crosshair (especially on scout) so I can watch their aim. It’s just that with no crosshair I can’t see if the aim is consistent and not all over the place, if you know what I mean. Kinda adds to the ‘skillfullness’ of it, though not with the editing but rather to the player.

Crosshair in Scout movies is definitely a must in my opinion and I feel like that’s the general consensus as well so you should probably look into that.

Andee

GoT<3
HoT<3

Agree with Morphine about the colours and the messy explosions. I think effects should be used scarsely and only for example to emphasize a transition to another clip or something. The colours are really depressing to me hehe.

I like seeing a crosshair also.

Spike Himself

TC

The colour correction looks pretty damn fine imo. You know, the if-colour-correction-would-be-a-woman-then-this-is-how-I’d-want-her-to-look-like fine. Have to agree with the above comments on explosion particles though.

Phrozen

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the messy explosions are part of pldx, switch to lawena it’s much neater ;)

pr3d

Dude the CC was really OKAY same goes for the skybox. I liked them both. But get rid of the PLDX effects.

seeker

Thanks for the large amount of comments :)
Will disable the particle effects on PLDX next time and will enable the crosshair.
Just for me to be sure : Does the sync, Color Correction and Cameras fit or is there something you dislike?

Luke!

Quoted from seeker

Thanks for the large amount of comments :)
Will disable the particle effects on PLDX next time and will enable the crosshair.
Just for me to be sure : Does the sync, Color Correction and Cameras fit or is there something you dislike?

I liked, but in my opinion, you should put a little more movement on the smooths. I liked the clean style and CC too. You’re in a good way :D

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